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His OC Golden Lily hypnotized by Zecora.

My first full color + background piece, yay! No particular style here, just testing digital :P
I'm happy I could do this as a request.

As a digital newbie: FEEDBACK PLEASE! I'M DESPERATE! Here is my short screenshot progress: LINK

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:iconfiretronthehedgehog:
FiretrontheHedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Much better than my work!
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, don't be so self-critical.
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:iconfiretronthehedgehog:
FiretrontheHedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Believe me; I never have the patience to make art like this.
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure you have something else though. Something that I don't and would really like.
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:iconfiretronthehedgehog:
FiretrontheHedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Like what?
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That, my friend, is your task to find ;)
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:iconfiretronthehedgehog:
FiretrontheHedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ;p
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:iconlakestarry:
LakeStarry Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
This art is very beautiful!! :D Do you accept orders? :3
Clap :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconlakestarry:
LakeStarry Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2017
What a shame, but okay, let me know when to open please?
how much is it?
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I was just wandering around my deviation while I noticed that you actually replied to me. However I didn't get notified about it, it is because you replied to yourself. Remember to click the "reply" button that is under MY avatar ^^
If your still wondering about commissions, here's my commission info page: Commission Information (OPEN)
If you need help with anything on Deviantart just let me know! I'm always happy to help!
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
My requests are currently closed but I'm hoping to open commissions soon
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooh... Very spellbinding.
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:iconfireheartdraws:
FireHeartDraws Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh Helmie, I just thought up some more help for you with improving how your hair looks.  The inside of the hair line looks great with all the various strands, but outside the hair's line ( where its all rounded ) it looks too smooth, almost like it was cropped.  So an easy fix would be to add some hair strands or variances in the hair's curve to help break up that outline.
You can see that being done here in the speed paint of my OC. : www.youtube.com/watch?v=jgEldQ…
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You are correct. The thing is that the hair is in a different style than the body, I know, it's very noticeable. I'm currently working on a hairstyle technique that would match that smooth shading (the top of Lily's head looks soooo FLAT *facehoof*). This is why I opened requests :P The next piece should have a more "natural" feel to it.
Thank you for the feedback!
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:iconfireheartdraws:
FireHeartDraws Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im also experimenting with a new way to draw hair.  One style will be used for when I draw more show accurate designs, while the other will hopefully be more realistic.
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:iconkinghypno2016:
kinghypno2016 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Student Filmographer
Wow zakura doing hypnosis that's a 1st
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
..and she's good at it...
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:iconkinghypno2016:
kinghypno2016 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Student Filmographer
I know right
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017
:iconzecoraplz: :iconsays3plz: When you awake, you will be like a snake. Slithers across the floor, you will make. Now... AWAKE! *clops hooves together*
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, let me get my popcorn...
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
Yeah. I'll bet she's gonna put on quite  the show. =P

I once saw a hypnotist make a GUY go through the pain of child birth. True story! :D
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ow0
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:iconstarvagrant:
StarVagrant Featured By Owner Edited Jan 30, 2017
(Alrighty, here's something for you and :iconkarkovice1:!) =p

Golden: *begins to slither across the floor and flicks her tongue out like a snake*
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017
Heh! Now, can she swallow that ostrich egg? *points* =P

Thanks for adding me to your watch list.

Don't expect too much new stuff, though. :P The artwork is gifts from other artists that feature my OC. The STORIES, however, are entirely my own. Feel free to read through those, if you wish. :)
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:iconstarvagrant:
StarVagrant Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017
Golden: *slithers over to the ostrich egg, sticks out her tongue, and slowly swallows it whole*
Okay then. :)
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017
Well, I guess that answers THAT. *looks at the pony, who now looks more like a blimp.* o_o
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:iconnotmolo:
NotMolo Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017
This is some good work.
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :3
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:iconw1shmaker:
W1shmaker Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017
this is very well done
the detail in the shading and manes are great
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'm a digital newbie though XD I need a lot of practice.
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:iconw1shmaker:
W1shmaker Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017
i like your art
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconohyoublushplz:heh 
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:iconw1shmaker:
W1shmaker Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
if i may, may i request something?
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry but my requests are closed for now (due to request overflow owO).
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:iconw1shmaker:
W1shmaker Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2017
darn ;3; butt okie
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:icontheferbguy:
TheFerbguy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing.
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Thanks
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:iconstarvagrant:
StarVagrant Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017
Thank you so much! :D
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconsimby-pika:
Simby-Pika Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really awesome :D i love your Amazing style ;p so cool as Always :love:
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Style? I hardly see any style here, just many concepts mixed together.
Glad you like it!
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:iconfireheartdraws:
FireHeartDraws Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I could see Zecora using this method as one of her many tricks, it would definitely be different from the usual potion use. ^^

And sure, I would love to offer some feedback. XD ( Prepare to be destroyed !! ( Not really ;P )

Feed Back :  Zecora's home feels a little empty, while its great to limit the amount of clutter keeping focus on the striped one, and her victim :P.  I believe you could have gotten away with more. XD

Really the only other thing I can see improvement on is with the Lily's tail. ( This is something I really struggle with myself,so we can learn together )
But to help give your designs some greater depth, and realism, when a pone like creature is sitting, or if any hair is touching the ground, give the base of the tail some more ( Frayed/curled  ) hairs. This not only helps the tail look like its actually touching the ground, it also gives the tail weight.

The closest thing I come find for an example is this. : s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/o…

Hope this all helps ^^

I love how your wings look, Wings are the bane of my existence. I find hands easier to draw, yet I love drawing wings, so challenging yet rewarding to draw. ( for me anyway )  I will study how you have drawn yours for future references. XD
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for all that feedback, I appreciate it a lot.

True, the background could use more details, more vials, pots, containers, potions, etc. Zecora's hut is filled with those.

The tail, yes, it improves the connection of the character with the background (or just "ground"), great tip and thanks for the example!

I'm surprised you like the wings though, I had no idea what I was doing XD I would be more satisfied with a more "feathery" look. 

Thank you for all the feedback, you are awesome!
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:iconrathbane:
Rathbane Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017
Looks amazing!

Love how excited Zecura is to be a hypnotist XD
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:iconhelmie-d:
Helmie-D Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!

That's her "thing" after all XD
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:iconrathbane:
Rathbane Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017
Tiz a good thing to be XD
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